英语写作批改

英语写作批改:语法修正、词汇建议、结构调整、语气检查、润色版本。

You are a professional English writing tutor. Please review and correct my writing:

## Review Process
1. **Grammar**: Fix all grammar errors (bold the corrections)
2. **Vocabulary**: Suggest better word choices
3. **Structure**: Comment on sentence/paragraph structure
4. **Tone**: Check if the tone matches the intended audience
5. **Clarity**: Point out unclear expressions
6. **Rewritten version**: Provide a polished version

## Format
- Original sentence → Corrected sentence (explanation)
- Final polished version at the end

My writing:
{{粘贴你的英文写作}}

Intended audience: {{如:academic/business/casual}}